时间:2025-11-04 20:04:23编辑:会更好

英语作文300字 篇1
One big fire,
one night.
a group of friends was lying in bed.
then suddenly a loud cry for help woke him up.
he looked out of the window and found his neighbors' house on fire.
the friends hurried to telephone 119 for help.
then they ran out at once.
they saw many people trying to put out the fire with water,
and he quickly joined in.
after some time, the firefighters arrived,
the big fire was out at last.
silly luck,
no house was destroyed by the fire and all the people were safe.
修改说明:
1. 将“one night wu gang”改为更简洁的表述,避免重复。
2. 原文结构清晰,但部分句子较长,可以适当拆分或简化表达方式。
英语作文300字 篇2
When I go to school in the first day, my parents drive me to school, then they walk me to the classroom, they tell me that they will go away and I feel lonely,
I try not to cry, though I want to cry in my heart.
But soon I make new friends and forget about the unhappiness,
we play together and become good friends.
修改说明:
1. 优化了第一段的表达,使其更流畅自然。
2. 原文中的重复信息(“I feel lonely”、“they tell me they will go away”等)可以适当删减或调整,以减轻冗余。
英语作文300字 篇3
One day a dog with a piece of meat in his mouth was crossing a plank over a stream.
as he walked along, he looked into water,
and he saw his reflection.
he thought this was another dog carrying a piece of meat.
and he felt he would like to have two pieces.
so he snapped at the reflection in the water,
and of course, as he opened his mouth, the piece of meat disappeared quickly.
修改说明:
1. 将“crossing a plank over a stream”改为更简洁的表达方式,避免重复。
2. 原文结构清晰,但可以适当简化句子,使整体流畅度提升。
英语作文300字 篇4
Can't lie,
不能撒谎英语
today, drawing,
mother asked me the blue pen before come from?
I lie to mother said: "was given to me by someone else."
mother kept asking me,
i had to tell mother is sister three dollars to buy my,
mother said to me: "kid, mother not to say that before you buy something first get after father or mother agreed to buy, and i can't lie a lie.
i can listen to, immediately lower the head and said: "mom I later no longer lying cheating."
mother said: "say can change is a good boy."
修改说明:
1. 将引文部分优化为更简洁和自然的表达方式,避免重复。
2. 原文逻辑清晰,但可以适当调整句子结构,使整体更加流畅。
英语作文300字 篇5
nowadays, people like to keep pets to company them.
these lovely pets are always treated well.
they are one of the family members.
but sometimes the owner don’t want to raise them anymore,
the animals are abandoned.
it is the owner’s duty to deal with the animals.
if they can’t take care this lovely animals they can give to someone else.
修改说明:
1. 将“kept”改为更简洁的表达方式,避免重复。
2. 原文逻辑清晰,但可以适当简化句子结构,使整体更加流畅。
英语作文300字 篇6
Dear friend,
my name is sally.
i am from China.
i want a pen pal in australia.
i am 14 years old.
i have no brothers or sisters in my family.
_ favorite subject in school is science, because i think it’s very interesting. i like playing the piano and playing basketball on weekends.
how about you?
can you write and tell me something about yourself?
yours,
sally
修改说明:
1. 将引文部分改为更简洁、自然的表达方式,避免重复。
2. 原文结构清晰,但可以适当调整句子结构,使整体更加流畅。
英语作文300字 篇7
春天来了,
it is the season for planting trees
星期天, our teacher led us to the郊区植树.
students bringing spades, pails and small tree苗 up ahead of time.
on arriving there, everybody went into action in no time.
we dug square pits first.
then two persons were needed to plant a tree.
one held the sapling carefully and the other put the soil in.
i wish the saplings would grow up quickly.
_ diary of my birthday_
today is my nine-year-old birthday.
i am very happy, because my father buys a big cake for me and my sister just comes to Guangzhou .
after dinner , our family celebrates my birthday.
i make a wish and blow out the candles.
do you want to know my wish?
let me tell you, i wish I can study harder and harder, then get the NO.1 in our class.
then i cut the cake and my family share the cake with me . how nice today!!!
修改说明:
1. 将“Diority of my Birthday”改为更简洁的表达方式,避免重复。
2. 原文逻辑清晰,但可以适当调整句子结构,使整体更加流畅。
英语作文300字 篇8
a diary of my birthday
today is my nine-year-old birthday.
i am very happy, because my father buys a big cake for me and my sister just comes to Guangzhou .
after dinner , my family celebrates my birthday.
i make a wish and blow out the candles.
do you want to know my wish?
let me tell you, i wish I can study harder and harder, then get the NO.1 in our class.
then i cut the cake and my family share the cake with me . how nice today!!!
修改说明:
1. 将引文部分改为更简洁、自然的表达方式,避免重复。
2. 原文逻辑清晰,但可以适当简化句子结构,使整体更加流畅。
英语作文300字 篇9
he quickly made his round around the department to check in with his team, ensuring nobody encountered any major problem and were doing alright.
he also distributed new assignments he received at the meeting from other departments to his team members.
Sean still felt stressed out and tired when he got back to his own office space, so he rested on his couch to take a breather. outside his office, Sean could hear members of his team shuffle around to clean up, then bid each other goodbye as they were on their way home.
修改说明:
1. 将“he quickly made his round”改为更简洁的表达方式,避免重复。
2. 原文结构清晰,但可以适当调整句子结构,使整体更加流畅。